Headline Rewrite For Dan Carlyle's "Car Buyer's Weapon"

Main Objectives

-Shorten The Headline, Make It Easier To Read, And More Eye-Catching

-Emphasise That Guide Is Created From A Former Used Care Salesman - Knows All The Tricks

-Techniques Are Guaranteed

-Product is badly needed if in the market for a used car
 

AFTER

It's About Time We Leveled The Playing Field...


"Former Used Car Salesman Opens His Dirty Vault Of Secrets Guaranteed To Give YOU The Upper-Hand!
 

Let Me Ask You A Question...What If You Walked Into A Used Car Lot And Knew Every Trick And Tactic A Used Car Salesman Was Going To Use, Could You Turn The Tables?


BEFORE

Earn Hundreds If Not Thousands On Your Next Car...

“ATTENTION USED CAR BUYERS:
 Uncover The Sizzling Secrets Of A Former Used Car Salesman & Never Get Ripped Off Again"

Shocking New Report Delivers Ultimate Peace Of Mind Plus Incredible Savings When You Buy Your Next Car - Or Your Money Back... isn't it time you beat the salesmen at their own game?